Wednesday, November 6, 2013

Describing My Character Miss Schnuriger


 

Written By Sian


She had sparkling wings as bright as a million stars bunched up in a sleeping bag. Her dress was sparkling like a rock of gold 2km big. Her shoes were so sparkly I could hardly see. On her face; her eyes were so light blue and amazing with lips so cherry red. Her legs were as skinny as her arms and her arms as skinny as her legs.

She talks like the princess she is, she is so, so sparkly and very nice. She smells like flowers and pretty leaves. She tastes like strawberries and raspberries mixed together. She sounds like the harp echoing off the walls of the church. Her clothes were as bright as new gold. Her dress had roses all over. Her shoes were like ballet shoes. Her powers are pixie dust and make things sparkle like gold.

 

2 comments:

eyeswideshut said...

Sian, what an amazing descriptive piece of writing! You have covered everything from look to taste! great work. Miss Schnuriger

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